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  2014年12月大学英语六级考试已结束,新东方在线[微博]、北京新东方四、六级名师团队第一时间对下午的六级考试情况进行点评。以下是四、六级名师团队金凌虹老师对英语六级作文的点评提供参考译文,供广大考生参考,祝预广大考生考试顺利。

  2014年12月大学英语四级考试刚刚结束,新东方在线[微博]、北京新东方四、六级名师团队金凌红等名师第一时间对上午的四级考试进行点评。以下是金凌虹老师点评作文部分:

  再过两天就是2013年12月英语四六级考试了,对于作文这一块,无论考何种形式作文,最简易的处理方式是:有汉语提纲则按照汉语提纲写相应的功能段落,若无汉语提纲则按照话题和内容要求直接写相应的功能表达或自己列出基本提纲再写相应功能表达!图表和图画、书信亦可如此!

  图画、话语评论和图表作文可按照相同模式来处理,新浪外语第一时间收集整理不同版本试题及参考答案。  新浪教育[微博]讯:2014年6月14日全国大学英语六级考试已结束,本次考试为多题多卷,新浪外语第一时间收集整理不同版本试题及参考答案,供考生参考,以下是2014年6月英语六级作文真题及范文(新东方):

  看图作文:学历歧视

  作文题目:My most impressive friends   我印象最深刻的朋友

  图画、话语评论和图表作文可按照相同模式来处理:首段引出话语,图画和图表,并对其内容描述评论;二段写对应现象、意义或危害,尾段写看法和建议并展望!背诵功能表达组合完成作文。

  题:For this part , your are allowed30 minutes to write an essay explaining  why it is unwise to judge a personby their appearance 。You can give explain to illustrate your point .Youshould write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words 。

必威 1六级作文

  2014年12月20日四级真题,写作部分延续了2014年6月14日四级写作的出题风格,具有以下四大大特点:

  近年四六级跑题率很高,审题是关键,建议关注1 体裁+话题;2内容要求:英文提示/汉语提纲;3字数。如13年6月六级“Earth provides enough to satisfy every man’s need, but not every man’s greed。” 应关注四类词:名动形副,如earth, satisfy, man, greed等,对应写现象、意义、建议或危害。以下是指导范文,希望广大考生认真学习参考。

  以下为新东方在线[微博]四六级名师董仲蠡为大家带来的六级作文范文:

 

  1.  反押题:此次作文,依旧没有考察“热点”的“环境、文化、网络”等大话题,而是“平民草根、接地气”;

  话题1:老年人孤独生活

  Currently, judging people by appearance has alreadybecome a common practice in our daily life. Is it wise to do this? The answeris definitely not。

 

  2.  易审题:依旧没有考察考生“审题能力”以及“跑题偏题”的可能性,作文的主题非常开放而明显,所有考生都有话好说;

  Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views on the lonely life of aged people. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

  Admittedly, a good and charming appearance will leave others a goodimpression for the first place. However, just as an old saying goes'"Neverjudge a book by its cover", it is not wise to judge one by appearance forthe reasons given below. For one thing, along with the development of science,plastic surgery can change one's appearance, so good looking cannot reflectone's true inner thought. Thought the history, we can find ample handsome boysand girls who turn out to be dangerous ones. For another, appearance is not theonly element judging others, but there are many aspects more important than it,such as kindness,  warmheartedness and its like。

 

  3.  重语言:主题明确,不会跑题,考生比拼的就是“语言质量”本身了。一篇不再“假大空”的文章,注定不需要使用太多“大而华丽的空洞语言、口号语言”,而在于考生能否灵活运用一些基础词汇和固定表达,写出语法正确、语言流畅的文章。

必威 2老年人孤独生活

  To summarize, judging people by appearance is the wise choice. Therefore Isuggest that we should pay more attention to one's inner thought and qualityrather than one's appearance。

  【参考范文】

  4.  技巧和能力并重:北京新东方四六级课堂所倡导的“写作技巧与范文背诵”作文备考思路依旧得到体现和应用。考生既要规律性总结历年真题出题的特点,又要勤加背诵和练习考前的范文。宗旨,多背,多写,背好,写好,总能够在考场上有话好说,有分可拿!

  Given is a simple but thought-provoking cartoon: an aged grandma sits in front of mirror, looking at “herself” in the mirror and saying to herself, “I feel rather lonely when my son goes to work and my grandson studies in school.”

  From the cartoon given above, we can observe that there is a recruitertalking with an interviewee. When looking at the resume submitted by thecandidate, the interviewer says,“Sorry, kid… Your resume looks good, but youonly have a Master’s degree…All the other applicants are Ph.D. ! ” Having heardthese words, the applicant seems to be quite helpless and embarrassed。

  最后,新东方在线四六级辅导团队预祝大家考试顺利。

  首句功能为:引出图画;之后为图画内容描述,主要是四要素:人/物、动作、文字和环境,写出四要素中的两三点即可。

  The cartoon reveals that the society has been placing a higher value oneducational degree. What factors might contribute to this phenomenon? Answersto this question may involve many aspects, and here are a few guesses: for onething, from the subjective aspect, quite a few employers hold that the highereducational degree people have, the more competent they will be. For another,from the objective aspect, with the professions in modern society becomingincreasingly segmented, employees are required to acquire higher degree tofulfill their tasks efficiently。

  Obviously, this cartoon can be naturally associated with the significance of children’s accompany for aged parents: if elderly people intend to enjoy happiness, it is advisable for their children to spend more time in parents. In contemporary society, it has become a trend for young people to be busy with their work and study. Meanwhile, an increasing number of youngsters find it difficult to have spare time to accompany lonely parents. However, it is adult children’s accompany that enables aged parents to build up adequate hope, love and enthusiasm for life. As a matter of fact, young people in large numbers have not come to realize the loneliness of aged people.

  Definitely, higher degreesenjoy obvious advantages. However, it is not advisable that employers judge aperson only by his/ her educational backgrounds. Let alone “DegreeDiscrimination”. As for ourselves, we should not only attach a great importanceto educational degree, but also spare no efforts to enhance our comprehensiveabilities。

  二段首句:图画联系主题;之后if句为图画简单评论;in contemporary society一句为图画所暗含的社会现象;meanwhile一句为相关人+具体感受;however之后为强调句式,论述意义;尾句是万能总结。

  【名师简评】

  As a youngster, I am convinced that it is of great necessity for us to accompany aged parents, no matter how busy we are. Accordingly, we should educate, advocate and encourage our friends, classmates and acquaintances tolove, respect and care all elderly people. (196 words)

  2014年12月20日六级真题,写作部分打破了2014年6月14日六级写作的出题风格,具有以下四大大特点:

  尾段首句:观点;二句建议;尾句展望未来。

  1.反押题:此次作文,不再考察2011年12月、2012年12月、2013年6、13月和2014年6月共5次“全英文引语、名言警句”作文的惯例,继2012年6月之后,第二次考察漫画作文;

  话题2:网络谣言

  2.易审题:依旧没有考察考生“审题能力”以及“跑题偏题”的可能性,作文的主题非常开放而明显,所有考生都有话好说;相对2014年12月上午四级作文而言,六级的作文相对“不够接地气,不够生活会化”,而是与“网络、文化、心态”等这样传统话题有关,看似题目很大,其实难度较小;

  Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay by commenting on the remark “It is unbelievable for people to believe what they should not believe: Internet rumors。” You can cite some examples to illustrate your point. You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

  3.重语言:主题明确,不会跑题,考生比拼的就是“语言质量”本身了。

  Given is a simple but thought-provoking remark: “it is unbelievable for people to believe what they should not believe: Internet rumors。” Obviously, this saying can be naturally associated with the seriousness of rumors: if we intend to have a positive Internet environment, it is advisable to eliminate/refuse rumors. (51)

  4.技巧和能力并重:北京新东方四六级课堂所倡导的“写作技巧与范文背诵”作文备考思路依旧得到体现和应用。考生既要规律性总结历年真题出题的特点,又要勤加背诵和练习考前的范文。宗旨,多背,多写,背好,写好,总能够在考场上有话好说,有分可拿!

  In contemporary society, it has become a trend for individuals to surf the Internet for the information they need. Meanwhile, an increasing number of people find it rather difficult to distinguish the true news from rumors. Searching the Internet, we can notice a great many examples like this: false news, ads and pictures. (危害) Then, it is these rumors that lead the public to be cheated, confused and even panic. As a matter of fact, experts in large numbers have come to realize the importance of Internet honesty.

  (来源:新东方在线)

  As a regular Internet surfer, I am convinced that it is of great necessity for government to punish rumor makers. Accordingly, we should educate, advocate and encourage our friends, classmates and acquaintances to refuse making and spreading rumors. Sparing no efforts to do so, we will witness a hopeful and promising future of Internet life.

  话题3:延迟退休

  Directions:For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Should Retirement Age Be Postponed? You’d write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words. Your writing should be based on the following outline.

  1. 近年来,推迟退休年龄引发人们热议

  2. 推迟退休年龄有利也有弊

  3. 我的看法

  Based on a recent survey on the Internet, a majority of individuals admit that aging society will bring a variety of problems to their life. Along with the trend of longevity, it has become a trend for people to debate whether it is wise to postpone retirement age.

  A number of individuals favor postponing the retirement age. In their eyes, it is this policy that enables the aging society to build up enough work-force. As a matter of fact, people in mounting numbers have come to realize this problem in an aging society. Even so, others hold a different view that postponing retirement age carries some risks. This policy can bring old people stress, but cannot arouse their enthusiasm for work, and cannot help them to enjoy their retirement pension.

  I am convinced that we should take into account the wishes of old people. If those seniors have enthusiasm for work, we should educate, advocate and encourage them to work and perform their tasks; if not, it is advisable for the society to create a comfortable twilight for them. If we try our utmost to do so, the future of old people’ life will be promising and hopeful. (187 words)

  话题4:教育回报

  For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Education Pays based on the statistics provided in the chart below (Weekly earnings in 2010). Please give a brief description of the chart first and then make comments on it. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words.

必威 3教育回报

  Given is a simple but enlightening chart by US Bureau of Labor: (图表描述万能) in2010,it had become a trend for doctors, masters and bachelors to earn more money in a week in US--- $1551, $1272 and $1038. Meanwhile, we can notice that weekly earnings of college graduates with no degrees, those with high school diploma and people with less than high school diploma were $712, $626 and $444 respectively.

  (注:图表描述没有必要面面俱到,写出大体趋势即可。)

  Obviously, this chart can be naturally associated with the importance of education: if individuals intend to acquire/ gain/ get better earnings, it is advisable for them to gain higher degrees. In contemporary America, it has become a trend for a host of companies/firms/corporations/ organizations to hire doctors and masters and pay them better salaries. It is education that enables them to build up adequate knowledge, skills and ability to deal with important tasks. As a matter of fact, employees and employers in large numbers have come to realize the significance of higher degrees.

  As a college student, I am convinced that it is of great necessity for youngsters to enhance ourselves by studying hard and getting better degrees. Do bear in mind: education is a worthy investment.

  最后,祝各位考生顺利通过四六级考试!

 

 

 

必威,  话题1:老年人孤独生活

  Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay. You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then express your views on the lonely life of aged people. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words。

 

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