本题主旨为手机是否可以取代上学,描述信任的

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本题主旨为手机是否可以取代上学,描述信任的重要性引出话题。  (作者:王江涛)2015年6月的大学英语四级、六级考试已全部结束,下面对四级作文的真题命题规律进行解析的同时,逐一进行了解析并提供了参考范文,供广大考生参考。

  (作者:王江涛)2015年6月的大学英语四级、六级考试已全部结束,下面对三篇作文逐一进行了解析并提供了参考范文,供广大考生参考。

  2018年上半年全国大学英语四六级考试于6月16日进行,新浪教育24小时全程关注,为你带来第一手四六级考试资讯。以下为英语六级写作真题及答案:

  Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay based on the picture below. You should start you essay with a brief description of the picture and then comment on the kid’s understanding of going to school. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 150 words。

  Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay based on the picture below. You should start you essay with a brief description of the picture and then comment on this kind of modern life. You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words。

  写作第一套

图片 1手机与上学

图片 22015年6月四级作文解析及范文:网络生活

  Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay on the importance of building trust between teachers and students。 You should write at least 120 words but no more than 180 words。

  命题解析

  命题解析

  破题思路

  本题要求首先简要描述图画,然后评论这个孩子对上学的理解。图画显示:一个小孩问母亲:如果我的手机已经知道一切,为什么我还要上学呢?显而易见,本题主旨为手机是否可以取代上学。

  本题要求首先简要描述图画,然后评论这种现代生活。图画显示:现代人无论工作、居家、娱乐还是睡眠,都与电脑密不可分。显而易见,本题主旨为电脑或网络对现代生活的影响。

  第一段:描述信任的重要性引出话题。(此处套用王菲老师“三八大盖”现象阐述功能段。)

  国内写作考试中已经反复考察手机这一热点话题。2009年MBA[微博]写作考察“手机短信”,2010年考研[微博]英语(二)写作考察“手机入网”,2013年12月四级写作考察“手机在人们生活中越来越多的使用”,也考查了“网络对学习的影响,以及教育是否仅仅是获得信息”。2014年12月,考研英语(一)写作再次考察“手机时代的‘聚会’”。如果考生研究过之前的写作真题,诸多表达均可使用。本题尤其和13年12月四级写作考察的“网络对学习的影响”异曲同工,几乎就是原题重考。

  国内写作考试中已经反复考察电脑或网络这一热点话题。2002年6月四级写作考察“大学生使用电脑情况”,2009年考研[微博]写作考察“网络的‘近’与‘远’”,2012年6月六级写作考察“网络对人际共同的影响”,2013年12月四级写作考察“网络对人们沟通方式的影响”。2015年6月,四级写作再次考察电脑或网络这一话题。如果考生研究过之前的写作真题,诸多表达均可使用。

  第二段:分析信任重要的原因。(此处套用王菲老师“三八大盖”现象阐述功能段。)

  写作思路:

  写作思路:

  第二段:说明信任对我们的生活的意义。(此处套用王菲老师“三八大盖”未来展望功能段。)

  1、本题首段应简要描述图画,指出当代有些年轻人认为手机可以取代上学。

  1、本题首段应简要描述图画,指出人们无论工作、家庭、休闲或休息,都与电脑关系密切。

  老师王菲参考范文

  2、次段最好进行正反论证,说明手机虽然可以帮助获得大量信息,但无法取代教育,教育绝非仅仅是获取信息。

  2、次段最好进行正反论证,说明电脑有利有弊:一方面可以满足工作生活的需要并娱乐自我,另一方面过度沉迷也会浪费大量的时间和精力。

  Without a doubt, a mutually-trusted relation between a teacher and a student is important for both learning and teaching。

  3、第三段最好提出建议措施:我们应该合理使用手机,同时学校教育必不可少、不可或缺。

  3、第三段最好提出建议措施:我们应该扬长避短,在合理使用电脑的同时,避免过度沉迷。

  First of all, knowledge is objective, but learning is relatively subjective。 Only when a student believe in what his or her teacher is teaching, he or she could start to learn something from the teacher。 In reality, I have seen too many students like or dislike one subject only because they like or dislike the teacher who is in charge of that subject, especially for those who are young。 Secondly, when one teacher consider that one student trust him, he would feel honored and satisfied, thereby giving more attention to the student。 Naturally, when one teacher pay more attention to one student, the student is prone to learn better。 I was one example to illustrate that, for I did very well in physics in middle high school because my physics teacher believe that I was the most talented student who followed him。

  参考范文:

  参考范文:

  Hence, both teachers and students should work together to form a reciprocal relation。

  It is subtly revealed in the portrayal that a young boy is talking with his mother in their house. The boy asks confusingly, “Why am I going to school if my phone already knows everything?”

  As is symbolically illustrate in the cartoon, a person is always staying in front of a computer no matter whether he or she is working, studying or playing. Even when he is sleeping, the image of surfing on line is also indispensable in his sweet dreams。

  [编写:有道考神王菲]

  We often hear of successful people who are largely “self-taught”. I say largely because, in all cases, they have received some formal teaching, whether it was from a teacher in a classroom, or from parents or a relative at home. In my case, I am glad I always learned from teachers, from fist grade all the way through my Master’s degree. A good teacher adds considerably to the materials contained in the textbooks。

  The metaphorical and impressive portrayal has subtly revealed the duality of the relationship between man and computer. On the one hand, there is no denying that the computer is currently one of the most efficient tools either to entertain oneself or to meet the work's needs. But on the other hand, a good many people admit that they are too much addicted to computers to maintain face-to-face contact with their friends and colleagues. Once indulged in the fictitious world, people feel reluctant to approach others and to concentrate on real life。

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  In conclusion, it takes a great deal of self-discipline to learn a subject via mobile phones with only self-study, having no guidance or instruction from a teacher. A skilled and talented teacher can add so much richness to what is being learned. I believe it is always better to have a teacher to some degree。

  Hence, it is necessary for us to use computers in a reasonable way and restrain from overindulgence. After all, the computer is invented to connect you and me, and to bring conveniences to our life rather than set a barrier to keep people beyond reach。

  如图所示,一个小孩正在家中和他的母亲谈话。这个男孩疑惑地问:“如果我的手机已经知道一切了,我为什么还要去上学呢?”

  如图所示,一个人无论工作、在家或娱乐,总是坐在一台电脑前面。甚至当他睡觉的时候,在他甜美的梦中,网上冲浪的画面也是必不可少的。

  我们常听人说某某成功人士多半靠“自学”成才。 之所以说“多半”是因为所有的成功人士都曾接受过正规教育,有的是在教室里听老师讲课,有的是在家里由父母或亲属给上课。拿我来说,我很庆幸从大一一直到硕士研究生毕业我都在跟着老师学。一位好的老师可以教给你许多课本材料以外的东西。

  这幅比喻并使人印象深刻的图画象征性揭示了人与电脑之间的双重关系。一方面,不可否认电脑目前是用于娱乐自我和满足工作需要的最高效媒介之一。但另一方面,很多人承认他们太沉迷于电脑而不愿与朋友和同事保持面对面接触。一旦沉迷于这种虚幻世界,人们不愿接近他人并关注现实生活。

  总之,在没有老师指点的情况下,通过手机自学一门学科需要严格的自律。而一位经验丰富且有才华的教师能教给你许多书本知识以外的东西。所以我想,在某种程度上,有老师教总归更好。

  因此,我们很有必要以一种合理的方式使用电脑,避免过度沉迷。毕竟,人们发明电脑是为了连接你和我,为我们的生活带来方便,而非设置障碍使人彼此疏远。

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